Back to my ongoing series.
Her Eyes
are
the lakes
of
Death
and
Life !
Those
very Eyes
Stoke
the Fire
of
Life
in Me !
One Look
and
I
want to
Drown
in them,
and
stay there
till eternity !
Uncountable times
have
I been salvaged
from
those very
deep lakes
Revived
only
to
Seek
and
Drown
in them again !!
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ur lines are making me go in my past when our english teacher was explaining a romantic poem of shakespeare and he compared it with another poem where the lover was saying one sight of my beloved and i will be mesmerished by it.
in these lines only one thing i could feel the devine love of poet towards his beloved. the closeness of his feelings which he feels and through these words he is trying to knock on that point were she will definitely say... u r person 4 whom i was waiting 4. u r the person..u r the person.
Diva, finding the lake is not enough !!
Lucky is person who is allowed by the owner of the lakes to drown in them till eternity !!
Esteem, the couplets here are not abt one way love....as you make it sound.
Its way past being mesmerised....more abt being unified with the love !
Diva, trust you to try maintaining the specific gravity instead of relishing the experience of being in the lake !
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